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The Candle Flame rev.2

neitherday
Date and Time  - Aug. 28th, 2004, 02:36 pm

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The Candle Flame rev.2

the candle flame flickers
in its unrelenting quest
to find the cause
of it's painful burning

crying waxy tears
it sinks lower and lower
ever slipping away
until it is extinguished
and finds peace


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From:[info]bryan_parrish
Date:August 28th, 2004 - 12:09 pm
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"You are special." - Fred Rogers
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From:[info]circebe
Date:August 28th, 2004 - 12:41 pm
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That has to be one of the most awesome poems I've seen you right thus far. Good job:)
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From:[info]sophy
Date:August 28th, 2004 - 07:50 pm
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beautiful.
From:[info]trillianne
Date:August 31st, 2004 - 01:35 am
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I really like this one. Seems like a classic.
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From:[info]kaitesquill
Date:September 9th, 2004 - 01:24 pm
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the summation of image and emotional finality... I love it.